Dharma

"Righteousness in Sanskrit"

Dharma

Through the ages of sorrow and blackness

There lays a lighted path

A path that if is taken

Will lead to reaches far

A path of love and honesty

Which leads to a good destiny

That’s a path known as dharma

                                     - Ahena MK 

 

Reviews

[KeeD]

I hope to walk this path someday, to attain some sort of peace with myself. Excellent poem.

[Ahena MK]

thanks!!!! even i do hope to walk this path sometime ...
ahena

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Good to find the right path and find peace and proper destiny. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. I will research Dharma. I appreciate the story from other places in my world. We can learn from each other good things.
Coyote

[Ahena MK]

Glad you liked it ....
Ahena

[Rita L. Sev]

The righteous path; if only all could follow this... Well done, Ahena - a reminder of the gifts that path will bring...

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading
ahena

[-Scribe in Style-]

Everyone has their own beliefs but I feel the spirituality.
A path of love and honesty
Which leads to a good destiny
A true face, the way i see it, love and honesty go hand in hand with success and achieving. An excellent write..

[Ahena MK]

thanks for the wonderful review ...
ahena

[Frieda P]

An enlightening read, nicely pen'd Ahena~!

[Ahena MK]

Glad you enjoyed
Ahena

[Odysseus Wanders]

Well, I'm not Hindu. Nor do I ascribe to any one path over that of my own. For me, It's not 'outside', its inside. But that's my philosophy.
So the writing, the poem... for me, is a devotion piece. And in that sense, is good. It aspires to a higher form of living, and encourages one, to look at ones own actions... I hope.
There is probably much that i am missing in the writing, simply because Im devoid of religious principle.
And usually... love and honesty are good things... even though these qualities seem to be described in very different ways depending on who is saying... So, this writing, as you see, has stirred my philosophical mind, which i dont mind. I enjoy in fact... so if you made me think Ahena, that is good enough... well done.

[Ahena MK]

Well this is not exactly a devotional writing... It's more like a human thing I just used a Sanskrit word for the title nothing else ....anyway glad you liked it
Ahena

[icelandicblue]

This is lovely, and I look for that path each and every day.

[Ahena MK]

Glad you enjoyed ,
Ahena

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

nice reading you poem!!!!

[Ahena MK]

Thank you
Ahena

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you for enlightening us...A very good write...:).................

[Ahena MK]

Thanks for the review
Ahena

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Ahena..................

[writ rajat]

well done it is very good often very shortibeautifull i always read poems about love & breakup but never about dharma , i am feeling good after reading this poem ,and want to go on your path

[Ahena MK]

Hahaha glad it created a good feeling in you ..
Ahena