The Fibonacci

fibonacci numbers are a set of numbers which make up nature... 1,1,2,3,5,8,13... are some of the numbers the first two numbers add up to the third like for eg. 1+1=2 and 1+2=3, 2+3=5 and so on...

The Fibonacci

Sorcerer, I sleep through the dark deeds                                  

the dark deeds which I rarely breathe

Rolling around my bed I puzzle

how many people I muzzle

In the dark there was a ray of light                              

traveling towards the number pile

All night I scribbled

yet got nothing right

papers and papers      

I wasted piles

A scarf I tied around me tight                           

wondering which numbers will unlock my mind

The box I held under my arm

which numbers do I choose from                      

six numbers in all I had to fill                                                         

each one a single digit

I mixed and matched random dates     

as I thought that would unlock the safe          

but I didn’t manage to get anything straight

And suddenly I remembered the Fibonacci             

as my mom had said “add carefully”

I unlocked the string                 

and pulled out a ring       

thanks to the Fibonacci 

                                   - Ahena MK 

                                 30th december 2013

Author's Note

would like to know how you feel about it...

Reviews

[mahima]

Nice way of conveying the Fibonacci numbers!!

And suddenly I remembered the Fibonacci
As my Mom had said ''add carefully''

[Ahena MK]

hahahah very funny ... thanks muchly

[ferousfinite]

Constructive: A very interesting number combination indeed. I can appreciate your discipline for structured writing. I myself adhere to the laws of the art of writing.

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !!

[NeiL ArandA]

It's like a code and combination. This is quite an intriguing and clever poem.

[Ahena MK]

thanks !! for reading

[Praveeta]

Lovely write. Thanks for sharing.

[Ahena MK]

thanks for reading !!

[Praveeta]

My pleasure.

[-Scribe in Style-]

Real nice with a mysterious feel to it.. I don't think that I have fully solved it. I would love to know more about it. I definitely enjoyed reading it. Some awesome rhyme and excellent images.

[Ahena MK]

glad you enjoyed
ahena

[Frieda P]

Ha briliant Ahena, I am so not a numbers person but I enjoyed your poem, Leonardo of Pisa would be proud!

[Ahena MK]

hahaha ... wish he could read it .. thanks for the wonderful review
ahena

[Frieda P]

Ha now that would be something! My pleasure.........

[Tam Warink]

I find it full of mathematically oriented mischief. The form is pleasing... not too symmetrical. It's just enough off-kilter to be human and approachable.

100 spiraling sunflowers

[Ahena MK]

love your reviews... thanks for reading and for the sunflowers
ahena

[Sami Khalil]

"I mixed and matched random dates

as I thought that would unlock the safe

but I didn’t manage to get anything straight"

Mix and match might be good or bad. I do puzzle on how many people you muzzled...Bravo...............

[Ahena MK]

glad you enjoyed ...
ahena

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I wanted to know more. You left me with question and mystery. I like the good description. You create good thoughts and visions. This would be a good lead for a interesting story. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ahena MK]

Thank you !!