Deep wave 🌊 - A dark GRAVE

Ocean always is not a wonderful place as it have it's own flaws.

Dive deep
Into the mesmerizing blue
Feel it's warmth
It'll show it's colors true

The school of fish
Swarming blissfully
Have it's own sharp fins
Ready to cut the skin on your body

The grand sea plants
Swinging merrily
Are overflowing with venom
To bite you any moment

The blue whale
And the mighty shark
Are on their way
In search of a new prey

The precious oyester
What we call
Is not easily captured
On your fall

This ocean
Is a huge paradise
Magnificently dangerous
As a sweet nectar with a slow poison

Reviews

[JulianaSun]

Yes, the ocean is a paradise that hides its own danger. Still, nature has its beauty, the kind of beauty man could never achive no matter how hard he strives.
The stanzas feel balanced, the good and the bad flowing intertwined. As if you cannot separate them. You can´t have the fish without the sharp fins, and the grand sea plants ( seemingly peaceful) without their venom...
The deep wave sounds indeed like a grave :)

[Sparsa Chowdary]

Ha ha there are many things that can never be separated but have to be accepted in the way they are. There is no perfect thing without a flaw, nor we have any perfect person without a single fault. It's the eyes of the heart that make the difference :-D