Shining stars of life

"We are very far
O my young little star
From the wonderful earth
But still every earthling
Love us all very very much

They find peace seeing us
Their favorite pass time is counting us
We so fulfill their wishes when we shoot
As they give us so much value"

"Ohh mama
How kind earthlings are!
They find us beautiful
Even though we actually burn

Then tell me one thing
If that is so
Then why don't they recognize
The value of their near loved ones
Who shine as the real stars of their lives! "

Reviews

[JulianaSun]

How lovely! And endearing. It´s true that we should cherish our loved ones more and tell them that we love them every day and that they shine as bright as stars to us. Sometimes, we need poems such as yours to remind us of the really important things in the world. :)

[Sparsa Chowdary]

Life is so short. By the time we realize where we are and what we are doing , time moves on. Sometimes expressing ourselves to are beloved ones and making them know what value they own in our life is a must for a happy and enduring relationship. Just pay some attention and some time time towards them, afterall it's our loved ones who completes our lives ;-)

[JulianaSun]

you are right! :)