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A Poem by Ajh

I would rip my heart out if that’s what it took to make you feel okay.
I want to rip my heart out because of how not okay you make me feel.

© 2018 Ajh


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And not a single contradiction in sight or mind.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I also really love this one, I sometimes feel like ripping my own heart out as to not feel the pain.. Niecely done..

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ajh

6 Years Ago

I’m so glad it’s relatable!
strong thoughts. matters of the heart are never easy. nice expression of powerful feeling and emotion ... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Huh....sometimes long distance ends up making life ruthless...and you feel like ripping of your heart!!
The two lines of yours are really deep, may continue do create like that😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


that's how I feel when I've been away from my special someone for a long time he reassures me that everything will be okay

Posted 6 Years Ago


Reassurance from a love that we've invested so much of ourselves in is natural. Reciprocity is one of the layers needed in relationships of any kind. When a love has soured, such unexpectedness may surprise us, initially. However, it is only after we've experienced love that we truly know the feeling--the pain--of love loss. Interesting and simple. Great read.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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