Into The Shadows I Go

Listening to people's lies

Watching how time flies

Someways just don't shine

Can't you see I'm not fine

Into the shadows I go

Death may have me lie below

Yet everyone will still be hard as stone

And as of now I am alone

Since no one understands

Everyone seems to shout demands

Never will anyone see my pain

Since people see me easy to reign

I am sick of everyone's show

Into the shadows I go

 

Reviews

[Shadows Ember]

I love this. Truly is relatable and how one feels at some point. Phenomenally penned.

[Aguilar]

Thank you and I'm glad to hear that.

[Shadows Ember]

Anytime hun

[Ren Grace]

Sometimes we are sick of people not understanding who we are and what we are feeling. Your poem is very relatable. Good read!

[Aguilar]

Yeah and thank you :)

[ron]

Very nice. I can relate to this poem very well. This is a fabulous poem.

[Aguilar]

Thank you :)

[ron]

You are most welcome :)

[Kesha]

Short and to the point. I feel we have all been there some time in our life. But remember it's abad day not a bad life :) Quite a good piece I must say :)

[Aguilar]

Yep and thanks :)

[@zeewhykay]

Well done, the concrete jungle we live in provides adequate stress and ''demands'', but it never returns the elevator with some relief and comfort.

''I'm sick of everyone's show, Into the shadows I go''

Brilliant lines.

[Aguilar]

Thank you :)