You once cared for me

Why is this world full of scorn and pain

Everything causes me to strain

I don't want it to be tomorrow

Because I feel so sorrow

Take me down so you can be

But don't forget you once cared for me

All the many treasons

For many different reasons

So if you please shut me down

So you can clear your frown

Do you claim that there's nothing to see

But don't forget you once cared for me

Reviews

[Laur]

The repeat of "Dont forget you once cared for me" really sticks it to whoever this poem was aimed towards. I felt it made it stronger. Sad yet so relate-able. I loved this.