Hey, you! Yes, you!

When loving someone leaves you heartbroken and you fret that further loving someone else will do the same.

Hey, you! Yes, you!
Those are broken heart's pieces of mine.
Which got shattered by love with time.
But, never mind, you can shatter them, too.

Yes, you can hurt me, too.
You can kill me one more,
As I am already dead to the core.
Yes, you can! That's what people always do.

Author's Note

Any king of criticism will be highly appreciated.
Do correct me if there is any kind of mistake.

Reviews

[Manasa.L]

Not everyone hurt nor everyone can heal a pain.
But some people are like medicines that heal everything and bring happiness into the dead life.
Never give up on love coz its universal theory that:
"If love can hurt us then it is love that heals us".
Nicely written.

[Agnibo]

Yes, you are right. :) It love which can heal any scar. :)
Thank you for reading, Manasa. :)

[shabiyaswati]

Nicely written..you have summed up the sadness and the grief of being hurt due to a loved one in simple words. Love the simplicity..

[Dara]

Your wounded heart will mend in time. Truly loving someone is always a risk, but as the saying goes, "Better to have loved and lost than never loved at all." Thank you for sharing this special write.

[Agnibo]

Yes, that's right. :) It is better to have loved and lost than to have never lover at all. :)
Thank you so, so much, Dara. And, you are welcome.

[Krutika]

Penning such emotions down is good way to deal with them. Not only does it clear our mind and heart but make us value and learn from the experience. Again we do fret about lot of things. 😁

[Agnibo]

Yes, I write whenever I feel low. It is really a good way to deal with such emotions. :)
Thank you so much for reading. :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

This is so sad :( why do you always have to make me blue? :p

You write so well! Thanks for sharing

[Agnibo]

I am really, really sorry if I do so. 😅

[Sonakshi Arora]

Lol 😂😂
Good job with the poem :)

[Agnibo]

Thanks a lot, Sonakshi. :) TYSM!
And, you are welcome. Next time I will try to write a happy piece. :D

[Sonakshi Arora]

Yes, please do so 😂😂😂
There is so much emotion in your poetry

[Agnibo]

Yes, I will try to. 😁 I just write what I feel. So.... :D
But the next piece will be a happy one sure. :)

[Anjali]

Amazing poem. No one has the right to Break our hearts, I loved the sarcasm in it. Keep writing!👍

[Agnibo]

Thank you so much. :) Yes, no one has the right to break our heart.
Thanks for reading, Anjali. :)

[Stacy Purvis]

Hey, You! Yes, You!
I love this! Thank you for sharing your raw, real emotion.

[Agnibo]

Thank you so, so, much. :) I am glad you liked it. You are welcome.

[Najam Us Saher]

A very sad write. Very well expressed your emotions. I liked the line in the end when you said that's what people do. It hit so hard.

[Agnibo]

I am glad you liked it. :) Yes! That's what I wanted to express through it.
Thanks for reading, Najam.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺