Indeed

Indeed

A Poem by iTryToWriteAllTheTime
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Profoundly inspired, profoundly lost, profoundly wandering with the weight of unanswered questions.

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I wandered aimlessly

What else could I do?

I could no longer see

Stars beyond the dark

Skies. My feet run cold.

My stomach runs empty.

I ask my heart to stop

Pumping. I don’t care how

Bad it hurts. The heart

Never listened. Where’d

My heart get the nerve

To not follow where I 

Pointed it?

© 2024 iTryToWriteAllTheTime


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Its a nice write, to ponder on....

But as you know the heart knows what it wants and what it needs to do, more than what we sometimes think...

Greatly penned.
-Amy

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Indeed. The heart follows it's own beat.
This is very good, poet.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 2, 2024
Last Updated on June 2, 2024
Tags: Wander, aimless, stars, hope, love, mind, duality

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iTryToWriteAllTheTime
iTryToWriteAllTheTime

Davenport, IA



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I write poetry, trying to work my way into bigger things, but started with poetry. I've got a big catalogue I think of poetry I'd like to share. more..

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