The Way

The Way

A Poem by iTryToWriteAllTheTime

We but walk among

The thousand walked

Paths, unable to grasp

The infinity of the One

True Path. The infinity

Of the now, then, and 

Forever. 


Liar is he

Who believes he walks

The Way by trampling

Over the steps originating

From the true infinity of

The Way, confusing his

Ambition for omniscience.

© 2024 iTryToWriteAllTheTime


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I think I'm still looking for that one true path. 🤷‍♀️👍

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A fine piece. I'm spiritual myself, so it certainly raised some provocative questions. The way is narrow indeed...

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love the last stanza
great work

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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mou
Perhaps that true path comes after trials. Sublime write!
- mou

Posted 7 Months Ago


One person in a thousand...
trampled by the other 999.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

maybe the one true path is the road not taken.
ambition when it comes to beliefs and faith has no place...
but omniscience, that is what could really lead us to that road...of infinity...the true one.
Let me ask Frost about this.
j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 16, 2024
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Tags: philosophizing, Eastern, omniscience, ambition, Infinity, The Way, paths, path

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iTryToWriteAllTheTime
iTryToWriteAllTheTime

Davenport, IA



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