happy haunting

March 2, 2006

willows sway to the melancholy serenade
of deceased birds in the attic you barricade...
and the dead will dance to a familiar tune
of dreams remapped on the dark night's noon.

Reviews

[intuitivesoul]

Ahhh I picked the perfect time of the year to read this. You are right, short and powerful. Usually its when you speak the least you say the most.

[Raminta]

It's short but powerful. The use of danse macab, really works here. It starts a bit unusually, but I guess not using capitals could also represent that there's no end or beginning, so that's a nice one too. A good brain wrecker for the reader, but also displaying strong emotions. I like it.