Redemption

This is a poem I wrote when I left my friends . . . . . and then returned, after finding myself.

She's coming home, redemption seeks

From friendships torn and ties so weak

Time heals both wounds and scars

For all those tears are now afar

We bruise, we grow, we laugh at it

Strength will always find the weak

She steps one foot into the sand

It moves, it shakes, it's not firm land

Her eyes though fix stare straight ahead

She will not sink, no matter what was said

Faith conquers all they say to her

With grace above, she will bear

These silent moments as it begin

To conquer lost, she soon will win

The awkward talks but hopeful smiles

Will guide her through this first dark aisles

The laugh will soon be genuine bright

And there she hopes for things alright

Reviews

[Erik Daniel]

I like this poem. Well done!

[Tarella]

That is a really nice poem you have there. I can totally relate to it..Some of us have been there and it's really cool that you speak about it through this poem.."With grace above she will bear." :-)