Locked

This is the story about my college friends and how I never feel like we actually have some sort of actual friendship

I'm locked in a sea of people I can never call mine
I smile, accept friendships I will never call mine
They care through the long hours of words and scores
Then they're gone like the cold at the rising of the sun

I'm trapped with these people
I'm trapped all alone
They flash all their money and I watch all alone
I never desired to live like their fancies
I only want friends, I can depend

Damn all these people
Damn all their cares
I'm still trapped with the people
and I am stupid I cared

Reviews

[Tarella]

I've been in that situation, think I still am...its like you are dragging a pile of baggage behind you....nice message..

[AngeloRosell]

Very creative I must say ! I enjoyed the message I gathered from this piece... I agree with third eye, the first stanza was beautiful ! Keep up the good work !

[bluezoey]

Thank you so much, that meant so much :)

[MyOpenThirdEye]

The first Stanza of this poem was easily the best part of poem, The rest brought the message of the poem very directly, but the speech was beautiful in the first stanza.

[bluezoey]

Thank you so much :)