I'll do it again.

Again i was thrown on the floor , It was bad , more than i could imagine for. But i promise sunshine , it'll bright one day I'll get a hold of your sight one day.

Why am i so generous , is it necessary ?
The truth is I'm made like that , courtesy to my mum.
She taught me it's alright to walk away sometimes ,
Since then whatever happens i always say - It's absolutely fine.
I don't blame anyone for what happened with me .
It was me all this long , responsible for everything wrong.
Even in this writing, i couldn't say what i really wanted to ,
How i spent all day preparing to meet someone , even polished my shoe.
But i was thrown to the ground when i was standing so near ,
That i could sense that you were there but in between were layers.
How can i possibly find love in this maze? I thought I've been through much more ,
I hope happiness does find all my trace ,,
But it's sad as after all this i couldn't even see your face.
But i promise i won't give up , I'll do it again just get one hold of your sight . Hope for this moment gets me through all my darkest nights.

Reviews

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Intense and excellent piece.
Yooure god gifted to have such an amazing way and structure of expressing.
"How can i possibly find love in this maze? I thought I've been through much more ,
I hope happiness does find all my trace ,,
But it's sad as after all this i couldn't even see your face"
Hope is always there...
Cheers...

[Ankit Miglani]

Thank you Tazeen ! Hope is always there . I hope it never leaves me.

[Joey Nizz]

Well written
Never give up always try and try until you get it

[Ankit Miglani]

Cheers to that man ! Thanks for the read.

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome, keep em coming!

[EcstaticEuphoria]

I like this. To me it was story meets poem, very creative and loved the content!

[Ankit Miglani]

Thanks rosalee ! :)

[Bhagyashree Bhat]

I liked it..very nicely written...

[Ankit Miglani]

Thank you !:)

[APOORVA]

wow!
another impressive writing.
good grasp on words, good flow. good command on grammar and most importantly... emotions, nailed it

[Ankit Miglani]

Courtesy to the destiny who showed me this moment. Thanks for your appreciation.