The lightning - an enlightening .

To the person who saved me in every way a person can be saved.

Ignited by her was an enlightning ,
Same how it came from the clouds :The Lightning !
With every spark on the sky ,
Like an illusion ,caused a blink in the eye .

The falling brush of it made a picture,
All that with the same texture ,
Which I wanted to rupture ,
Kissed me !
I don't know why .?.?.?.?.?

What others saw was flashes on the screen ,
For me it was beginning of a new reign !
The violent sounds even set the heart of trees thumping ,
Along with them ,
The roots of the tree holding bad memories was bumping !

Then at last Rain hugged me with high expectations ,
Every falling drop smiled over the most beautiful carnations !

All the colours of life which i was craving for ,
The emerging rainbow from the clouds conquered that thirst !
Hope was desire for it to be the last ,
Fate was destiny to have it as my first !

This rainbow emerging after a lightning stroke is worth craving for & loving for !

Author's Note

Not an expert , just find peace in writing. Happy just to share my writings.

Reviews

[APOORVA]

Ignited by her was an enlightning ,
Same how it came from the clouds :The Lightning !
SUCH POWERFUL START, WOW!

What others saw was flashes on the screen ,
For me it was beginning of a new reign !
The violent sounds even set the heart of trees thumping ,
Along with them ,
YOU REFLECT AN AMAZING WRITING, PERFECT WORD CHOICE, NICELY EXECUTED AND A FEEL...THAT'S KEPT IN LINE.


All the colours of life which i was craving for ,
The emerging rainbow from the clouds conquered that thirst ! MY FAV LINES FROM YOUR CREATION, WOW...WELL WRITTEN MATE

[Ankit Miglani]

Thank you so much for your choiced words . I'm glad you liked it. Those lines are my favourite too as the only part i love about my life is that rainbow. Thabks once again.

[Bhagyashree Bhat]

Good work ... Keep it on 👍

[Ankit Miglani]

Thank you !

[Nidhi]

nice & original piece of writing....😊

[Ankit Miglani]

Thank you !:)