End Together

First original poem. Long. Six stanzas.

We fight together
Together as one
To our deaths do we go
To a brighter future we go

Our sacrifice unburdened
Friends one and all
Time and space
Cannot divide us

The battle has come
To it do we travel
Through worlds unknown
Our love for each other
Keeps us strong

For this eternal army
Shall not fall
Our demise is certain
But others will yet live

Eternity at the forefront
Shall make a guiding light
To our victory
To our hearts

Love,
Sorrow,
Dreams,
Those make us

For all as one
We don’t die alone

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Kaylamarie5101]

I like what you are trying to accomplish with this poem. Though, I found it quite difficult to read, it didn't flow together, it could have just been the way I was reading it.

[Aevum]

I quite agree. This was my first major attempt at poetry on my own. I plan on giving it the possible refining it deserves. I just need thye proper conditions as all my poems are spontaneous and on the spot. Thank you for the review!

[Aevum]

I actually wrote this about 5 or six years ago.