Blank Paper

Blank Paper

A Poem by Aethereal
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Blank paper is a magical place-holder

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Blank Paper

 

Should your world get colder

right down to the wire,

fill this blank place-holder

with a blue sapphire.

 

Place it in a folder;

light your world on fire.

When you get much older,

add to it a lyre.

 

Strum notes that are bolder

‘til you feed your pyre;

then add your last molder,

an angelic choir.

© 2014 Aethereal


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well I love how I read this and it all went from reading
the poem Blank page that inspired Me to write Blank sheet of paper
by the poem Blank page by: avinash. Then you read Blank sheet of paper
and you're Inspired to write Blank paper
it is like a on going Chain that never stops.


love these lines.

Place it in a folder;

light your world on fire.

When you get much older,

add to it a lyre.

Thank you for sharing.

Blessings. kindred poet


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your detailed review, KindredPoet! Also thanks for being the connecting link between avin.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

you're very welcome. Thank you again for sharing. Blessings. kindred poet




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left alone in the dust of a corner, reams of blank stacked and wrapped,
Paper,
left alone cleaved to each other their polite cousin embraces won't make the news,
Paper,
Inked labeled the chest plate, a dream on ,
Paper,
alone the words fall in the forest to rally the call, to pool at the trunk of ,
Paper
Yet to be.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your poetic review, lee von cleef! I enjoyed how you personified "Paper". I like the imag.. read more
lee von cleef

10 Years Ago

Ya, paper has fun when no one is looking too.
Excellent write and fabulous metaphor, you are talented, keep it up, congrats

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Linda! "Blank paper" is one of the best metaphors ever.
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

You welcome, take care my friend
well I love how I read this and it all went from reading
the poem Blank page that inspired Me to write Blank sheet of paper
by the poem Blank page by: avinash. Then you read Blank sheet of paper
and you're Inspired to write Blank paper
it is like a on going Chain that never stops.


love these lines.

Place it in a folder;

light your world on fire.

When you get much older,

add to it a lyre.

Thank you for sharing.

Blessings. kindred poet


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your detailed review, KindredPoet! Also thanks for being the connecting link between avin.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

you're very welcome. Thank you again for sharing. Blessings. kindred poet

The blank paper represents endless possibilities, perhaps why it holds that magical place in a writer's heart. Beautiful write Aethereal, truly enjoyed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Kalypso! Where there's endless possibilities, there's room for all of our ho.. read more
Very nicely done. I enjoyed this. There is a lot of opportunity when faced with blank paper and a lot of fear too, I think.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Tina! A blank paper reflects back what we both love and fear the most.
love is always kept kindling by the pen...when we first lose it...when we get much older and then even right before our last breath...the pen still holds the fire of what we once felt.

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your insightful review, jacob! That fire never dies.

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Added on April 29, 2014
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Tags: blank, paper, sapphire, lyre, pyre, choir, fire

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