Dolphin Love

A little story about a wish that one's beloved dolphin could climb out of the sea and live on land. It's a Pantoum.

Dolphin Love ( Pantoum )

 

Dolphin show your love for me.

May you walk on land someday.

Try to climb out from the sea.

May our true love guide your way.

 

May you walk on land someday.

Leave my sorrows far behind.

May our true love guide your way

as tomorrow’s pathways wind.

 

Leave my sorrows far behind.

The Fates and their ways must bend

as tomorrow‘s pathways wind.

Surely all my tears must end.

 

The Fates and their ways must bend.

I wish I could be with you.

Surely all my tears must end

way beyond the deep dark blue.

 

I wish I could be with you.

Try to climb out from the sea

way beyond the deep dark blue.

Dolphin show your love for me.

Reviews

[MsJewel]

I love the rhyme and flow - smooth and graceful - this form fits your words perfectly!

:) Julie

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your touching review, Julie! As smooth and graceful as whipped vanilla ice cream topped with a cherry.

[MsJewel]

delicious!

[Patricia Wedel]

Love is sweet like a dolphins play...
but need the sun and moon in a
different way. Dolphins do have
feelings to express as we render
to their quest. truly... Pat

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Patricia! Love is truly "sweet like a dolphin's play..."

[Dhaye]

Applause for you, Ae! We're both good learners. LOL.

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Daisie! These kinds or poems are much easier to write than my signiture poetic form.

[Dhaye]

Aethereal's Trochee must be patented...

[Aethereal]

The only reason that it hadn't been thought of before is because no one could write one until I came along. I more or less hold a creative monopoly on my poetic signature form.