Perfect Day

A little poem about a perfect day.

Perfect Day

 

Pirouetting honeybee

bend your little inky knee,

bow low to that cherry tree

on the first of May. Hey!

 

Spiders spinning fancy-free

webs that build a fantasy

catch a nit, a fly, a flea

who has gone astray. Hey!

 

Robins what do you foresee?

Do you have a guarantee

of worms, maybe two or three,

as you look for prey? Hey!

 

Puffy cloud move close to me.

Do you know to what degree

I’m part of your pedigree

on this perfect day? Hey!

Reviews

[Zahra]

aww i loved this poem. Fun to read. Beautiful

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review! Beauty is perfection.

[Zahra]

this is very nice. Felt like a song

[Aethereal]

Most of my poems begin as notes pirouetting through the plush gardens of my mind.

[Sami Khalil]

A perfect poem for a perfect day. I like all the animals you have mentioned...Bravo........

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Sami! All those animals wanna see you every Spring, and puffy lil clouds too.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. All good. You are welcome. :)..............

[Abdul Aziz]

This is a perfect fusion of your mathematical capabilities, ear for meter, and just appreciation of an awesome day. This reads so well as a song for young children, and is just inherently metric and joyous. This is such a pleasure to read!

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your detailed review, Abdul! Children possess all that I have and more, but most of them lose it in the quicksand of life.

[Madalyn Beck]

This is a fun read! I love the anticipation for May to arrive and for the spring time activity to bloom into it's full glory. It made me yearn for that springtime glow to finally arrive! Beautiful and delicate write! (:

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your detailed review, Madalyn! May Day is one of the best days of the year.

read moreThanks for your detailed review, Madalyn! May Day is one of the best days of the year.

When it rains
May Day glows
with rainbows
arcking above the green.

[Frieda P]

Oh this was great fun to read, smiled all the way through! Sweet springtime poem, and clever too A.

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your detailed review, Frieda! I'm glad that you liked it. I just wanted to cheer every one up today. Hey!

[Frieda P]

Mission accomplished, now can you do my paperwork? Hey! ;)