Who?

Who's the One?

Who?

 

Who's the Who

that makes all things new?

Who's the Who

that keeps loving you?

Who's the Who

whom we must pursue?

Who's the Who

is the Who, Who, Who.

Reviews

[Tina Louise UK]

hmmm thought provoking little read...enjoyed :) x

[Aethereal]

Thank you for your review that a Who like you may do!

[Tina Louise UK]

:) ....welcome x

[Blue]

Hmm, I like your musing, Aethereal. We know the answer but for some lame reasons, we don't acknowledge Who.

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Arzel! If we encounter a Referent Reality who reads our minds and then takes the material form of that which we imagine then this "Who" is only a projection of that which our minds fabricate. Human beings have a way of creating only what they desire to find as apposed to finding the unexpected. We should be careful what we wish for because if it’s a monster within our “Id” it may materialize and then destroy us.

[Blue]

True sentiments. It's like I'm listening to my Psychology professor now. :)

[A. Amos]

Such a powerful subject! Your writing is so magnificently constructed. 

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, A. Amos! "Who" is a power word.

[A. Amos]

I agree and you're most welcome my dear

[Marie]

There is a Who in all of us...

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Marie. We know what "Who" means and we project it onto The Other,both objecftive and mystical, and for that reason we're human. My computer has no idea, my pet cat has some other idea yet unknown to me.

[Abdul Aziz]

I'm tempted to say it's Doctor Who, but I'll resist. ;)

Even though you're communicating the humanness of our being, I admire your near robotic mathematical usage of English, particularly in the last line. There's a strict economy of words in this poem, but it serves your message very well.

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your detailed review, Abdul! If some of my poems seem to have mathematical traits, then it must be because I'm a professional mathematician who just happens to write poems.

[Marie]

I kind of thought the Who was a rock group....

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

The who...can be anyone who's important to us. Someone who can help us recognize ourselves.
There's a continuity of questions because as we go on with our journey, we keep on finding WHO could complete us as a human being.

This is interesting. Thanks for the share.

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Dhaye! The most important "Who" is ourselves. How is it that we refer to ourselves as a "Who"? My computer can't do that no matter how well I program it. Human beings don't seem to be functions of programs.

Who am I ?
I'm the"Who" that I am.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice thing to ponder.
You're welcome.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The rhyme is visible in this verse...
the questions get the mind thinking...
I felt the last part like the song...Who are you...
by the group band: The Who...
may be you should put the music with the read...

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Glen!
Ink

When ink
makes us think
it puts us in the pink.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i hear that last line reverberating...the echo of it...like the echoes when we are out in nature...i think that "who" is our inner self...the one who will sooner or later find peace...become one with everything around us.

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review on Who?, jacob! We're that Force of Natue who knows what a Who is. It's us? It's everything that's important to us. It's the only thing that gives us a motive for Being in itself.

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful song and tune...I guess there is a band called the who...Bravo...................

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review of this song poem, Sami? Calling a Force of Natue a Who makes it more palpable to human beings. Who put the who in that truth we pursue? It's how we think about forces that do.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I love that. I got it now...Bravo..............