Romantic Lullaby

Romantic Lullaby

A Poem by Aethereal
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A lullaby about a romantic evening on the beach.

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Romantic Lullaby
 
Waltz with me
under lunar light
where the sea
whispers songs all night.
 
Let us flee
to a stellar height
where we see
meteors ignite.
 
Let low key
love songs expedite
fantasy
as we hold hands tight.
 
Let us be
as the stars in flight
floating free
till the sky grows bright.

© 2013 Aethereal


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Moonlight always seems to bring people together, the sun is much to harsh. If I could dance I would to this beautiful song like piece you have written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Kenaz! Ah, so this is more dancing song than lullaby.
Your words dance gently and rhythmically on the screen, Aethereal - this is lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for noticing my dancing words, Rita.
Your rhyme in this piece only adds to its romanticism. It really is a gorgeous piece of poetry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, icelandicblue! I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
Ah, I haven't read your poetry in a long time and I'm much the poorer for that. This is a very sweetly written poem that showcases all your skills as a poet. I really loved the single rhyme throughout the poem, and particularly the use of "expedite". Some times, form and content merge to make a beautiful poem, and that is what this poem is. 100/100 from me!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your detailed review, Abdul! I seem to be the only one in the world writing single rhyme .. read more
Abdul Aziz

11 Years Ago

Nah, narwhals, more like.
Oh dear, what a great delightful lullaby you shared with us. Thanks for making the piece. I loved the greatest lullaby i've ever read on the web. What a coldness of words i've seen through this piece... the great impact, the passion of love, the feelings of heart, the voice of soul everything's very nicely penned by your hands ... Good description here you edited to make a lullaby brilliant. Well done once again for your beautiful Lullaby.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Inspiring Writer! I'm happy that you enjoyed this lullaby. Perhaps I'll writ.. read more
Dreamy and enchanting, your romantic words flowed so easily through this write. The rhyming was wonderful. A beautiful love poem. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your detailed review, Lydia!
Very beautiful and smooth feel to this. Love the rhyme scheme and how it held on throughout. This is definitely a lullaby of love my friend. Very nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing my lullaby of love, Jack!
Very romantic indeed. Ecstasy of emotions. The idea of a romantic evening on the beach is very whimsical and lovely. Wonderful quatrains with the rhyme scheme: abab cdcd efef ghgh. I need to try it out. You always give me new ideas Aethereal. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your detailed review, Shane! Also, I only used two exact overlapping sounds in this poem,.. read more
I have to applaud you for this! Such wonderful enthusiasm conjured up by precise wording. Right on key!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your review, Astri! Enthusiastic relationships need the right conditions to hatch at time.. read more
Some sweet melodies reside within this one...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your sweet review, Chris! All of my poems start with a melody within my mind. This brings.. read more
Chris

11 Years Ago

Chuckling here... very true. Good morning.

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Added on September 12, 2013
Last Updated on September 12, 2013
Tags: lullaby, romance, moon, stars, love, music, sea

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