Very sensual... On one level, you have the bee and the flower; a relationship which is wrought with sexual tension--the flower opens and gives freely so that that bee may pollinate and propigate the species. Metaphorically, you have the relationship between man and woman...I quite liked this one. I don't know which way that I really want to look at it, as the metaphor, or as described... Creative, unique and very "you". :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks for your detailed and insightful review, Sarah! Everything in Nature is interrelated in any n.. read moreThanks for your detailed and insightful review, Sarah! Everything in Nature is interrelated in any number of real and metaphorical ways. Just look at he relationship between the Sun and Moon, Apollo and Selene. Relationship is what defines everything. The relationship among the pieces of a puzzle define that puzzle's global reality.
Heartfelt write. Very deep and sensible write you've written. It's a very short piece having powerful meaning of it. Great job!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks, Inspiring Writer! To be deep and sensible in as few words as possible is what we all strive .. read moreThanks, Inspiring Writer! To be deep and sensible in as few words as possible is what we all strive for.
Wow it's really exquisite. One of the really beautiful poems i've read on wc. How beautifully it flows, loved the last two lines the most
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
This poem has been building in my mind for weeks, An inspiring first line in one of your poems set t.. read moreThis poem has been building in my mind for weeks, An inspiring first line in one of your poems set the stage for this poem's completion.
Beautiful illustration of this symbiotic relationship. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks, Rita! This poem was inspired by some of the poems that I've been reading on writerscafe over.. read moreThanks, Rita! This poem was inspired by some of the poems that I've been reading on writerscafe over the last few weeks.