A mathematician not only counts numbers,
She also enjoys a bee while loving a flower.
Enjoyed the wonderful piece.
Congratulations,Aethereal!!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks, zainul! And the bee does her geometric dance that tells all her freinds in the hive where to.. read moreThanks, zainul! And the bee does her geometric dance that tells all her freinds in the hive where to find the pretty flowers.
11 Years Ago
You are most welcome,lovely friend.
Yes,the bee is not dancing like Mohammad Ali to defeat th.. read moreYou are most welcome,lovely friend.
Yes,the bee is not dancing like Mohammad Ali to defeat the opponent.
It is amorous and elegant dance that produce fruits for the continuation of species and honey for
health and vigor.
Love your imagery.:)
Short, but by no means lacking in metaphoric imagery or a strong sense of passion. Nice flow.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks, S.L.H.! This is the shortest poem that I've written so far.
Bee, and flower making honey love... I so loved this, simple but so deep metaphor, for I lately asked myself, how does the bee, brings the honey to the honeycomb? where does the real process come out off? the mouth, or the a*s? you know, interesting poem, you remind me of it again, I should google it but have to run right now, but couldn't resist to review this one.... it has metaphor, love, slight erotic, nature, all aspects in it like it should....
Beautiful one! oh we love insects... for they bring thoughts.
Bug hugs
- Elisa
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks for you detailed 'bug hug' review, Elisa! A honeycomb is a baby bee nursery as well as a Quee.. read moreThanks for you detailed 'bug hug' review, Elisa! A honeycomb is a baby bee nursery as well as a Queen's waxy castle.
11 Years Ago
It's indeed to be seen in these two ways you name.... You're welcome... Anytime...