Bee & Flower & Sun

A relationship between a flower and a bee.

Bee & Flower & Sun

 

Touch my pretty petals of desire

little humble bumblebee.

Taste me as you lick my nectar's fire.

Set my inhibitions free.

 

Underneath the rising sun

where we merge from two to one.

Reviews

[Abdul Aziz]

Haha, awesome. I've always thought that bees were probably a bit too naughty, as you've remarkably brought out with this poem :)

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Abdul! Necessity is always naughty.

[Angi]

Oh! This had me blushing, Aethereal. That naughty little bee... Angi~

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Angi!

Bumble stumbles where she may
each and every sunny day.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

the nature of it all in the lines of this one...simply put in the lines...

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your insightful review, Glen!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...at times simplicity says more...

[Kelly Scheppers]

What a lovely interpretation of nature!

[Aethereal]

Thanks Kelly! This poem is also in the short style that you experiment with.

[Tom]

Nature at her simple best and you capture the moment so splendidly !

[Aethereal]

Thanks, tom! There are an infinite number of such moments in Nature.

[Tom]

So true and every one a gem !

[zainul]

A mathematician not only counts numbers,
She also enjoys a bee while loving a flower.

Enjoyed the wonderful piece.
Congratulations,Aethereal!!!

[Aethereal]

Thanks, zainul! And the bee does her geometric dance that tells all her freinds in the hive where to find the pretty flowers.

[zainul]

You are most welcome,lovely friend.
Yes,the bee is not dancing like Mohammad Ali to defeat the opponent.
It is amorous and elegant dance that produce fruits for the continuation of species and honey for
health and vigor.
Love your imagery.:)

[S.L.H]

Short, but by no means lacking in metaphoric imagery or a strong sense of passion. Nice flow.

[Aethereal]

Thanks, S.L.H.! This is the shortest poem that I've written so far.

[Aethereal]

Bee, and flower making honey love... I so loved this, simple but so deep metaphor, for I lately asked myself, how does the bee, brings the honey to the honeycomb? where does the real process come out off? the mouth, or the a*s? you know, interesting poem, you remind me of it again, I should google it but have to run right now, but couldn't resist to review this one.... it has metaphor, love, slight erotic, nature, all aspects in it like it should....
Beautiful one! oh we love insects... for they bring thoughts.
Bug hugs

- Elisa

[Aethereal]

Thanks for you detailed 'bug hug' review, Elisa! A honeycomb is a baby bee nursery as well as a Queen's waxy castle.

It's indeed to be seen in these two ways you name.... You're welcome... Anytime...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very sensual write...buzzing with that feeling of love...and letting go of inhibitions.

[Aethereal]

Thanks, jacob! F'lowers know what Busy buzzy bees enjoy most.