Puppet God

Puppet God

A Poem by Aethereal
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About the Puppet Master and his ways.

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Puppet God
 
Puppet Master lure 'em in
with each wooden doll.
Move each limb, and painted chin.
Make 'em dance and craw.
 
Remind people of their kin.
Make 'em each recall
fond emotions once again
as your protocol.
 
They drop pennies in your bin.
Large sums grow from small.
Wood directs the fate of skin
as their tokens fall.
 
Puppet Tyrant hide your grin
as you count your haul.
Master crowds who walk herein.
Be the god of all.

© 2013 Aethereal


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If you have not said or stated your muse on your review response. I would not have guessed the plot or concept. This one also reminds me of a ventriloquist. Its really a simple psychological trick with the use of a simple wooden doll but in the hands of a master artist or clown make people happy and not frown. But by just simple amusement folks are willing to pay for some silly play.

This also reminds me of the most intelligent creature or animal in the world. You may not agree but its a canine . For centuries they have honed and polished this ancient technique. They don't really have to work to make or earn a living . All they have to do is to look cute and pretend cute and the owner is hooked and bewitched. Of course with the exception of a farm canine who would have to round up a sheep or goats to earn a living..But majority just pretty smart .

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aethereal

10 Years Ago

I've nothing to prove. I'm one of a kind of seven billion on this planet as far as I know. I don't m.. read more
NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

I'm not afraid of you anymore. I was onetime and at some point . But now I don't. But no alien abduc.. read more
Aethereal

10 Years Ago

We're all part alien. Over millions of years our genes have been compromised by microbes joining the.. read more
this brings to mind the question of Oedipus Rex....puppet of fate, master of his own, or a combination of both...

how much free will do we really have....???

damn your poems are insightful and a joy to read.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks, jacob! Unconscious tendencies such as the Electra and Oedipus Complex often control others a.. read more
An interesting piece indeed. I have startling visions of clowns and other scary carnival things while reading this. Great imagery.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Sarah! Many poems have been written with a carnival theme. I love going to them when they co.. read more
Girl Friday (Sarah W.)

11 Years Ago

...and extremely scary. I have a thing about puppets, puppetiers and clowns. Eerie, and yet intere.. read more
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Wow. This is truly an amazing piece. It uses a great metaphor and puts a new spin on it. You used great language and great rhyming. Very powerful and well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your graceful comment, N.B. Mowery! A puppet show theme is one of the most powerful meta.. read more
Splendid read and write. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aethereal

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Brandon!

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Added on June 28, 2013
Last Updated on June 28, 2013
Tags: puppets, crowd, pennies, god

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