Nature's Child

Relationship between Nature and child.

Nature's Child
 
Stardust child beneath the sun,
Mother Nature's chosen one,
there are wonders for your eyes
cruising her supernal skies.

 

There's the beauty of her rain,
droplets at your windowpane
tapping pitter-patter song
as cloud drummers roll along.

 

There's the beauty or her snow,
ice flakes gliding to and fro
on a panorama white
sparkling as they spin in flight.
 
There's the beauty of her clouds,
figure forming vapor shrouds,
cloudy mice that morph a horse
as they tumble on their course.
 
There's the beauty of her light;
sunny day, or starry night
when her stars and moon above
hug you with their glowing love.

Reviews

[Tom]

Very impressive with some vivid imaginary poetically described.

Enjoyed this, well done !

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Tom! Nature has an inner child.

[Perkele.7885]

Your ability to convey the light and airy, frivolity and fun is so prevalent in your style! Makes me jealous as I compare it to my short-comings! I have to work a bit on the unfettered aspects of life. I just love to write in my favorite grey element as I know it so well!

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Raj! You lost your frivolity somewhere back there in your childhood along with all your toys, and bears. Write some poems through the eyes of the child that you were, and all shall be well.

[Perkele.7885]

In my case, I would have to write in the eyes of the child that I always had wanted to be. I had to grow up well before my time. No excuses, just my circumstances at the time. Have no fear though, I am well adjusted! Self motivated to fly right and now I have a lot to write about. I saw to it that my children got to be kids. Isn't life grand when it works out that way?

[Friday]

Nice theme and nice wording. Very accesible and that's admirable.

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Friday!

[Parsimony]

Beautiful imagery, we are borne of all those elements.

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Parsimony! We're the mind, and emotions of Nature. But for us, Nature wouldn't be aware of herself.