Fuzzy the Bear

The sad story of Fuzzy the bear.

Fuzzy the Bear

 

She left Fuzzy in the rain.
"Don't forsake me," said the bear
as he cried and cried in vain
with a lost and lonely stare.

 

Deep within his cotton brain
he knew that she didn't care,
that they'd never hug again.
Chunks of hail began to tear.

 

Fuzzy's life began to drain
as he withered in despair
from great loneness and pain
as he fell to pieces there.

 

With her childhood on the wane
she was trapped inside the snare
of a status quo domain,
one that had no heart to share.

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

It takes me back to where the family crumbles and fail. When we try to maintain the status quo. Trying so hard to keep up with The Jones. We sacrificed the refrigerator over a Jaguar or Mercedes Benz ..

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your review, Neil! I our attempt to keep up with the status quo we lose touch with our feelings to the point of numbness.

[Inspiring Writer]

What inspired you to write such a nice piece ?

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Inspiring Writer! I was inspire by a child and a bear whom I used to know.

[Perkele.7885]

I like your Fuzzy bear tale as much, if not better than the Fuzzy bear tale that I grew up on. Uh oh, I am being old again!

[Aethereal]

Thanks, perkele7885! Fuzzy's been around for a long time.

[Perkele.7885]

Just call me Raj! Kiitos = Thankyou

[Aethereal]

OK, Raj!

[Danielle]

Sad but so well-written.
Great rhyme scheme as well!

[Aethereal]

Thanks, Danielle!