Waiting Still

Waiting Still

A Poem by Aerielle Louise
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I used to control my feelings before
Making sure it would not exceed for more
Believing that things are just temporary
Makes me wanna treat all, untruly

Since then I feel my heart is a stone
that I do not easily cry nor mourn
I feel pain without saying it with my mouth
Unexpressed emotions need to burst out

It is better to love and get broken than not love at all
the things  I learned from my nostalgic fall
I realized that the pain I ought to feel from being sincere
is worth the tears that made me stronger even with fear

I did my best to let everyone feel my love and care
Not knowing or minding if it leads nowhere
Just the fact that pains are really unavoidable
Love turns the stone to be now breakable

Someday I know true love will come to me
It's the love from my family, friends and God especially
Yet i still dream of someone making poems for me
and touch my heart as I stood still waiting patiently

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© 2015 Aerielle Louise


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Keep waiting. It would not be in vain. I know how you feel. I have been through what you are going through. Its true, its better to have loved and lost than never have loved at all. Life experience is never taught in schools- you have to go through it to learn it. So do not regret anything you have learnt through pain and heartbreak. they are just proof that you are strong enough to pick up yourself and go on with life.
Beautiful write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aerielle Louise

9 Years Ago

Thankyou so much Annie Isabel. I appreciate the time you took for reading. Thanks for the insights y.. read more



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Hold on to hope. True love will come. You don't find love, love will find you.
"Yet i still dream of someone making poems for me
and touch my heart as I stood still waiting patiently"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww this is a touching write. the ache is palpable in every line. life is full of setbacks. but don't they say that what doesn't kill you makes you stronger?
I enjoyed reading this one, Aerielle.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aerielle Louise

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Keep waiting. It would not be in vain. I know how you feel. I have been through what you are going through. Its true, its better to have loved and lost than never have loved at all. Life experience is never taught in schools- you have to go through it to learn it. So do not regret anything you have learnt through pain and heartbreak. they are just proof that you are strong enough to pick up yourself and go on with life.
Beautiful write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aerielle Louise

9 Years Ago

Thankyou so much Annie Isabel. I appreciate the time you took for reading. Thanks for the insights y.. read more

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Added on April 14, 2015
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Aerielle Louise
Aerielle Louise

Calamba, Philippines



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I started writing poems when I was 15 years old. I just tried if I can. I don't know if I have the talent. I just enjoy writing poems. It really serves as a medium of expressing myself. I love ever.. more..

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