Tremendous Distress

the suffering

I was lost, all alone

 

Like world's being sucked to oblivion.

 

Tears of frustrations

 

Immense miseries and exaggerations.

 

 

 

 

Savoring happiness was all I want,

 

But fate's so cruel and adamant.

 

Streamed my eyes with tears

 

That succumbed me to fears.

 

 

 

 

Bewildered with what's my purpose

 

Living in a life full of chaos.

 

Encompassing struggles each day

 

Maybe 'till I lose my breath away.

 

 

 

 

I feel a tinge of jealousy

 

Inside my heart that was so dreary.

 

Why life is so unfair?

 

Turns me down and never dare care!

 

 

 

 

Terrible loneliness closed around me,

 

Enormous agony, eats the whole me.

 

I could hardly breathe.

 

Could hardly count my very heart beat.

 

 

 

 

Feeling like'em a living dead.

 

Always left by life dumb founded.

 

Thinking of ending it will suffice my gloominess.

 

But Gods so good, lifts me out of darkness.

Reviews

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There is hope on the end. Beautiful description of abyss. Void and dark flow.