Under the Flesh

girl loves guy and he has a gurl already so the girl who loves him is heartbroken until she finds out that his current gurl isnt all she seems to be

There is no laughter

No reason to smile

I once thought of love

But it's lost forever

Never within my grasp

Nor an arms length away

It's leagues beyond me

All because of you

Croos-legged on a bench

I drown in familiar song

To me, it's a peaceful escape

Noise that overrides my own

Steals my attention

Such distubance annoys me

Suddenly replaced by joy

You're there

I'm lost for words

Such an angelic smile

Placed upon your face

Such deep brown eyes

Full of hope and happiness

The awaken me

The familiar song dies

I'm left in beautiful silence

With you

Falling into a sweet oblivion

Then my world begins to spiral

You were waiting for, not me,

But a true goddess with such beauty

Blinding me but dazzling you

What do you see in her?

I'm speechless again

What happened before

Just a shattered dream

It's reality I must face

Within moments your gone without a trace

I can wait

I'm very patient

When it comes to you

The surprises I thought I knew

Were complete bull

She's stunning, I'll give her that

But she couldn't be more dull

I tried to befriend her

Such anger is unimaginable

Though when you approach

She suductively emits a purr

I rejoice silently when she's gone

Because under the flesh

She is ugly

Reviews

[deeps]

Some people are like this and hit that nail on the head here...Very well written wriet with straight forward emotion.