Shark Tank

it's kinda hard to explain... this poem is about two friends who come from two totally different backgrounds and because they are so diff. ppl are saying their friendship wont last but they overcome their peers doubts

Take your place beside me

Give me your hands so everyone will see

That you are the sibling of my soul

Time itself won't take its toll

We need each other to keep us whole

Time is cruel, we both know

The love in our eyes will clearly show

That it won't separate me or you

We'll hold on tight; that's nothing new

Someday soon they'll see that too

Hold my hand and stay by my side

This year, we'er going for a ride

People will try to pry us away

We must stay calm, keep our temper at bay

Let's go by the rules of the game we play

The wind blows strong, we must be quick

Its frostbit fingers chill us in one swift lick

They're coming, time is ticking fast

All of them think that we won't last

The see the sixe of the shadows we cast

They differ in shape and size

Never will they hear us say our good-byes

We are powerful so we stand there and take

The calls and revolts they make

Because nothing they do will put us at stake

Reviews

[Aradie Rain]

Wow this is really good! A few spelling errors but other than that the metophors and similies really make clear what your trying to say. Great job. By the way, I dont think your crazy, When I write I talk to myself too. lol

~Aradie