The Silver Knife

I watch

as my best friend

my close confidant

picks up the silver knife.

It gleams

but dully

as I see the flash

the flash

of the blade

in her hand.

I stare in disbelief

as she advances towards me

knife blade out

shining with a cruel menace....

Then she picks up 

some bread

then butters it

then hands it to me.

"Here you go!"

she says

cheerfully

and we sit down

amid the happy 

sidewalk walkers

and continue with

our breakfast.

Author's Note

I hope you find this funny! XD

Reviews

[Adelise Eclair]

A pleasant twist at the end ^^

[Mystic_Angel]

OMG the first part scared me xD

[Vergil]

My God. The ending was so unexpected. I loved it. xD

[Bella Luna]

haha wow I thought this was going to get really ugly! I thought her friend was going to kill her and then "Here's some bread!" haha so funny, I love this!

[Aelia Darkshadow]

Thanks, I go the idea from a hilarious pic and I thought -I must write a poem about that!-

[Aelia Darkshadow]

Please could you tell me what I could do better?

[Eryn ♪]

We can't really because this is excellent. You capture the reader in the first segments then you let off the tension well. Great job. Sorry no criticism.