Beneath the Appearances

For all you care,

I could be pond scum

nothing but

pond scum

I saw everything

in you, an

angel with the white wings

a beautiful entity

but now I know

Candy can be poison

Light can be Dark

Things are not always what they seem

beneath their appearances

 

Reviews

[Adelise Eclair]

I agree. One cannot truly know of poison until they taste it.

[Bryan]

I love your poem! It is a really good way to put the saying "looks can be deceiving", and you gave it a deeper, more emotional meaning. Well done.

[Eryn ♪]

Well put my friend, very well put.
I guess we just have to look a bit deeper and push away the disguises to see the truth.
One question of opinion, Would you rather a beautiful lie, or a hideous truth?

[Aelia Darkshadow]

Hideous truth. No contest. I'm already hideous in real life, so what have I got to lose? XD

[Eryn ♪]

Then you and I are the same. You are right, we have nothing to lose. X)

[Aelia Darkshadow]

I like your thinking XD

[Dr. Wood ?]

never judge that book until you've read at least half of it......Your words ring true

[Aelia Darkshadow]

Thank you!