Wishes

Wishes can be light as day

Or dark as night

With the feathers of a swan

Or the Wings of a raven

My wishes, they soar

through the air

floating freely

they are just wishes

but one day

they will be my reality

 

Reviews

[Adelise Eclair]

I like the honesty in this piece. A sense of hope with not a bit of anxiety. For with the burdens and joys that comes with ones desire, that image of it all coming together will never fade.

[Bryan]

I like how you got the message across with such simplicity! I really like how well you closed the poem, it wrapped the whole poem up nicely! Good work!

[btopasna]

Simple, yet deep. Great job.

[Aelia Darkshadow]

Thank you

[btopasna]

Youre welcome.

[Eryn ♪]

Whoa, deep. With only a few short words you show a very determined and realistic voice. Good Job.

[Aelia Darkshadow]

Thank you so much!