Revenge

This is actually one of many prologues that I like to write... I seem to have talent at writing prologues XD

I sprinted through the woods, fearfully glancing over my shoulder every once in a while. I could feel them shortening the distance between us, and if I didn't know better, I'd think was all a dream. But it was real. The fear that chilled my spine was definitely real, and I knew my time had come. I spun on my heel, and in a second, they were on me, tearing into my flesh. Agony wracked my body, and it all went black.

Author's Note

Do you think I should write a book like that?

Reviews

[Cousitarian]

There are two stages to ever writing. The first part is this: Get your idea through words on paper into the reader's mind which, greatly, you did so here. The second part is this: Sharpen your details, skills, along with writing to better illustrate things for the reader and, naturally, not even I'm a master at writing. Perhaps I'm saying this; Your idea here is definitely attractive to me, the reader, despite the few errors I found and this should be worked on. So, if your work on this project then I'd be glad to know. Also, yes, you should write a book on this. I'd like to know more. Very much so.

[RandomBookLover]

I think you should make a book out of this. You attracted my attention right off the bat and I loved the suspense you put into it. I hope you make it into a book, Ill read it! :):)

[Bella Luna]

This is really good! You created the perfect amount of mystery and suspense! You could definitely turn this into a book! :)

[Hey Hey Renee]

I think that this is a good start, but if you would want to write a book off this, you would have to elaborate more. Add more details. The idea itself is great, however. Keep going with this!