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Romance

"I'm smiling, but actually I'm dying, inside,

That's because I miss you, and I don't have you by my side.

I'm completely dry, there are no more tears;

Because in my heart, I just hold your memories.

 

Why do I have the image of your sweet face?

Sow clear in my mind? I can spot it even from space,

Everywhere I look, left or right,

I wish I can see you, so I can hold you tight.

 

Come to me already ,my dear one;

Come slowly ... Ok, this time you can run.

Stop hiding away from me,

I'm empty; a water, without a sea."

Reviews

[amelia]

i carry your heart with me(i carry it in
my heart)i am never without it(anywhere
i go you go,my dear;and whatever is done
by only me is your doing,my darling)
i fear
no fate(for you are my fate,my sweet)i want
no world(for beautiful you are my world,my true)
and it’s you are whatever a moon has always meant
and whatever a sun will always sing is you
here is the deepest secret nobody knows
(here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life;which grows
higher than soul can hope or mind can hide)
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart

i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

[SomeoneSomewhere]

Nice rhyming scheme, and the poem certainly evokes emotion. Well done!

[Mircea Popister]

Thank you for your kind words! It was my first poem that got published.