My Addiction

My Addiction

A Poem by Adriana

I can't stop 
I need you so bad
If you leave I may die
Help me 
I'm drowning in sorrow 
Come back and never leave me
I love you too much
You're bad whether you're here or not
Please stay

© 2016 Adriana


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To be the realist you can be realize that the majority of people will come and go and to shape yourself around something so temporary and unlikely to last and to let that person become your everything might result in you being with nothing when they decide they are done. Nice poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


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To be the realist you can be realize that the majority of people will come and go and to shape yourself around something so temporary and unlikely to last and to let that person become your everything might result in you being with nothing when they decide they are done. Nice poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Seems like the poet/speaker is in deep ocean of love and completely arrested in the middle... I loved the simplicity of expressing the need for that person... Quite a lovely piece of work... Short and shows addiction...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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