Depressed and Low

Just been a bit down..

So alone
In a self conceived force
So down and low on trust
In a negative attack on my mind

My hearts beating deep
For I have no one, here with me
My hearts pumping itself
To a depressed human, who no one sees

No one acknowledges
No one perceives
No one cares
For this being who is me

Light my way out
The way out of this pit
I happened to fall in

Carry me through
All the way out
Is there something I would never doubt

I distrust many not few
I trust few and not many
But so empty I see myself
What would do?..

Reviews

[Flutterby aish]

"No one acknowledges
No one perceives
No one cares
For this being who is me"
This is one time when you really need someone beside you but eventually you have to deal with it all alone which makes it harder! Feeling depressed and low.....well hope you feel better soon :D ! I liked this piece of your's! I feel its an amazing one.....keep writing!

[AJ TheSnowMan]

thanks n.n