Ignorant Belief

Ignorant Belief

A Poem by AJ TheSnowMan

Are you as ignorant as it seems
They have taken your all
Yeah
Are you as blind as it is
They have all your control
Yeah

Travel the world
Research there minds..yeah
Each with an inclusion
That they are the great
Those beings they worship
One and not all the same
You think you have the true god
Hell they could all say the same!

Are you as close minded as it shows
They have stripped your will
Yeah
Are you following the genocide
The one "He" hasnt stilled
Yeah!

A Life! a different mind
Each has there own
So don't enforce your kind

Each with an inclusion
That they are the great
Those beings they worship
One and not all the same
You think you have the true god
Hell they could all say the same!

© 2013 AJ TheSnowMan


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I like how you got across the message; it almost sounded like a song!

Posted 11 Years Ago


AJ TheSnowMan

11 Years Ago

that was the point haha thanks
I think your text really supports unity between religions, or completely disregards them. It makes me remember songs that are about genocide and the cruel things the people that worship a true God do to others. Fanaticism has been rationally proved to be the wrong way to believe in things. Good writing although I think "there" must be their in a couple of lines. I liked it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


AJ TheSnowMan

11 Years Ago

This poem (or lyric) is open to any interpretation you'd like :) As for my reason, coming from an at.. read more

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Added on June 25, 2013
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