Eyes of a Stranger

A Poem by AJ TheSnowMan

Felt such a strong connection while i was already supposed to be committed to another..

Meeting the eyes of a stranger
Is there really someone
Meeting the eyes of a stranger
Can she be the one
The idea always lingers
Deep in my thought
The idea always lingers
And so I got
Away

Away from the time being
Went and searched inside myself
Away from the time being
Now as hollow as a shelf
In her eyes now that I see
What is she now to me
A stranger goes a long ways
When you get to close and talk these days

Watching the lips of a stranger
The conversation flows
Watching the lips of a stranger
Our hearts inside glows
Welcomed in, inside my head
Where she tends to stay always
Welcomed in, inside my head
She stays there in all these days..

© 2013 AJ TheSnowMan

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writer in trial

Its cute.:)
i loved it. it reminded me a story of my own. :D
The same thing happened with me. We both were in the same bus sitting face to face. He was looking at me.But it was such a gentle and tender look that it was hard for me to take my eyes off. I am like always in a hurry mood. Most of the times some mishaps happen to me because of my carelessness. That day also same kinda thing happened and i noticed him smiling at me as if he is liking me not making a fun of me. I was hoping for some conversation,but none of us spoke. He was constantly staring at me throughout the journey and finally landed up at his destination.Unfortunately we both had different stops. :(

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11 Years Ago

hahaha wow... me and my current gf were actually in the same class for an entire year and she liked .. read more

11 Years Ago

So cute. :)
Finally you started the conversation.Cool. :D
i am glad that everything we.. read more

11 Years Ago

thanks :P it wasnt an easy road but we ended up together n.n haha

Sami Khalil

"Watching the lips of a stranger
The conversation flows
Watching the lips of a stranger
Our hearts inside glows"
A splendid read and write...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thank you :)

11 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)

Dr. Wood ?

it happens often..I happened to mt mother and father and they were married for over 60 years and had 7 children.......You did a good job here for a gut of your age..the very best of love to you if this is a true story....You might want to alter 'INSIDE OUR HEARTS GLOWS'....The HEART should really be singular...I know it affects the rhyme.. but trust me..I rhyme almost ALL the time...It is better to have that than bad grammar

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thanks and it is a true story, and thanks for the heads up about the grammar error, didnt realize it.. read more

Djourrisse Appleby

The first thing that came into me mind after reading your poem: Love at first sight. Hahaha. What's nice about strangers, you'll never know what kind of adventure that simple look would do. :)