silent cries

SILENT CRIES

Voices being unheard

Sufferings being unseen

Interests not cared of

Intellect not praised of

 

Love which was infinite is null

Feels like i’m dull

Wants to finish of everything

But end up doing nothing

 

Ignorance is the biggest tool

They think i am a fool

Shuns me away all the time

As i am a pin at their dine

 

Wishes everything to get alright

Wishing blossom to be at some point

Burdened under the set of norms

Wants to acquire a real form

 

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

The society makes us live on their approval but what we really ignore in this hypocrisy is ourselves!
Great write!

[Adiyah]

thnx jyoti

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of thoughts.
"Ignorance is the biggest tool
They think i am a fool
Shuns me away all the time
As i am a pin at their dine"
I liked the honest and direct thoughts in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Adiyah]

Thnku fr reviewng it sir

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

We can be burdened by so many things and our thoughts can diminish or blossom if we are negative or positive. Let us shun negativity and ignorance for there are greater battles in life than the silly things. An excellent write...:).............

[Adiyah]

Well said sir..n thnx. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[Anahat]

Emotions well portrayed!
There are a few extra s added to a few words like wishes everything to be alright.
I think it should be wish!
On the whole nice one! :)

-Love Anahat :)

[Adiyah]

i will look upon my sss anaht :)

[Arezzo]

This is a very good Angst poem. The insistent rhythm really makes it a success. Well done!

[Adiyah]

thnx for the encouragmnt :)