Shattered Memories

This poem describes all the feelings anyone has cleaving from his best friends.

I have no words to describe

All the l've and care I've got in my life.

Always getting the desired possessions

I have always been in the positive vibes.

All the moments I live with creatures so fancy 

I'm not unlike the heroes in movies.

All my life I've been with the ones I'm fond of

I've been founding happiness on trees.

But the grief of cleaving still survived

Losing the ones who'll never be forgotten.

I find myself lost in them

The were the ones who made my heart molten.

All singing,all dancing,all chattering beings

Finding joy and happiness in themselves.

The beings call themselves friends

to each-other, they are like elfs.

But time came when I had to cleave from them

It was like someone stabbed me from behind.

It was like the sun had set and the rain was about to come

I never had feelings of that kind.

When I tried to live on without them

It was like a part of me was stuck in the past.

A pert that could never revive

A part, which had my feelings so vast.

When I finally left them all

I could never live with ease.

I could never dream what I admired

Beacause now I had some 'Shattered Memories'

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Wow, this is stunning and beautiful! The second stanza would have to be my favorite, did to its powerful imagery. But I do admire the story you told here because I feel that we all have those friends along the line with which we were once so close to, but one day, we dropped away. Had to suddenly wake up and live our lives without them, their presence. It feels strange at first, wrong even to do certain things and not have them be around to experience them with you. To not talk to them every so often as you used to. But sometimes, it's better to move on without certain people cause Perhaps they could later turn into someone we hardly recognize.

[Aditya kumar]

thanks!! I just tried :))

[Emily]

Love the meaning! Keep it up!

[Aditya kumar]

Thank you :) :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

Nicely done! Hopefully you will continue to write in and out of your soul. I admire your tribulations as a testament to your ongoing fortitude. The poetry forges the soul and you my friend have felt the blade of fire.

[Aditya kumar]

Thanx you sir ! will surely keep writing and improving :)

[priya]

impressive..considering this is your first poem on writerscafe..its beautifully written. no matter what happens, one should continue to push back the boundaries of inner life. :)
keep writing