'Purity' conquers the 'Crave' !!

'Purity' conquers the 'Crave' !!

A Poem by ADITYA (Deep)
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Sometimes, an inner voice depicts the clearest vision in our life....that helps dealing with situations the best way we can, we should !! This prose is just a similar gesture of one's situation...

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It's his unstable mind !

A perpetual thought has occupied his mind today.....decreeing his mind, soul, actions of emotions !! 

He has been pushed to an quandary.....to fight against the random thoughts and icon of his humanity ~ that he has to possess today.Because he's hosting his guest for the night who is a splendor of grace, siestas in the lap of charm. She's respites as a plucky, b'coz her heart has judged this is to be a safe shelter for her.


The thoughtful mind was not allowing him to sleep, there was a composed feel of randomness-mixed feelings-and-apposite !! And finally..............he exclaimed at inner-self:

  

“..…It’s often difficult to control the mind….! difficulty increases when you need to accumulate the random thoughts and have control over it !! Coz’ Breezy waves are always refreshing; you can’t resist its hug standing at its door step " yes, at the wet sands of the seashore !!


I could probably comprehend the urge of the waves " it has the love, care, comfort, gesture and essence of togetherness ! ..….but I feared; magnitude of each wave was different and consequence of its embrace was even unknown !!


And  finally, I lingered with the closed arms; b'coz 'purity' always conquers my crave !!



........................................With a promise to dream-in again ~ Adi

© 2013 ADITYA (Deep)


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hiiiiii many thanks for your good words !!
I am not a regular writer, but whenever I have thoughts in mind I would like to pour them in my writings !
It was just a try................nevertheless your words are motivating, especially about "magazine" :P :P

Cheers !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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So good to see a pure heart writing here......no followed rules still unblemished creation!!
Indeed the hugs of breeze can't be ignored...as they come to us by their own...where in nowadays we seek to doors for love!
Great read😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


ADITYA (Deep)

6 Years Ago

Thnks...
Ya I meant penned, mistyped from mobile unfortunately
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6 Years Ago

Pata hai!😊😊😊
ADITYA (Deep)

6 Years Ago

Hmmmm.... :)
"he" is a good writer,
"he" is think just right,
did "he" ever fight with you?

b'coz my "she" fight with me everyday!


sorry can't wait for a lol. seriously... you are right about this purity. only a pure soul can be a great human, make humanity proud.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ADITYA (Deep)

11 Years Ago

hey thanks Harshi.......
Thanks @Prrity ..... for the nice words on the piece,

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice flow of thoughts and the words you gave them without losing much time i guess ensured the essence is there.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hiiiiii many thanks for your good words !!
I am not a regular writer, but whenever I have thoughts in mind I would like to pour them in my writings !
It was just a try................nevertheless your words are motivating, especially about "magazine" :P :P

Cheers !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yu've a great talent of writing. you've to reach out, i meant, you've to publish your own magazines... what yu think ?
100/100.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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ADITYA (Deep)
ADITYA (Deep)

Mumbai, India



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A core dreamer of life ! I am not a regular writer, I am writer ~ of a moment, of a feeling, of a situation; remains undefined !! I write simply to express my state of mind, someone's condition,.. more..

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