Retailiation

The climax will tell you the difference between poem and reality!!

Yes you ditched, yes you lied
I heard your laugh when I cried;
But I still love you it is true
And I have a gift, just for you.

He will be your fate, he will be your fiend
He will be your mate, he is the gift I’ll send.
Don’t you worry he is the best
Trust me girl I have great taste.

Wear that dress, that black costume
For you are bride and death is your groom
Pain will subside as you embrace your doom
while you cry alone in a dark black room.

For all these days my gift was due
Close your eyes he will come soon
Dearest friend anything for you
Let me load my gun
And then

boom!

Reviews

[deadlife]

It's nice to be a poem.
Not a reality.
And yes it differentiates both :)

to feel distrusted, harmed, ditched, killed. . . Hurts. There's hurt inside, but revenge is not the answer.
Atleast not the right answer.
If i was being ditched, i should admit that i allowed myself to be ditched. I'm also responsible.
And also on a light note.. one can only cheat a person, who trusts him =)

Well.. it's a creepy write and i enjoyed reading it.. Like a story comes..to the end.
Wonderful.

[Poeticpiers]

revenge my friend rarely satisfies.
ok to fantasise
About what you would like to do
but dont attempt to make it true
Because it will rebound on you