We will say Hi!

A proposal which got rejected

Here is a tale,I wanna confide to you,

Probabaly you know already what I am upto,

You must have heard it umpteen times, and i am sure you do,

get it straight, short and simple, i love you!

 

Your lovely smile, your face so cute,

I plan to say things but eventually turn mute,

I can only throw a smile and say Hi,

That is it.Full stop.We cross without biddin' goodbye.

 

And that's when I give my head a jerk and mockingly say oh f**k,

I got a chance but was defied by luck,

Despised by luck n deprived of luck,

Demised by luck and I admit that sucks.

 

Like somone pirates your heart and rips it up in two,

And sit back and watch is all you can do.

Funny how has time changed, so quick, so fast,

Life flashes reminiscin,in a clear contrast.

 

I have planned few things,I am not sure they will work,

You might take me as a flirt or a jerk,

Perhaps u will deny sweetly,excusing you are commited already,

And will help me find a girl,as an alternative remedy..

 

But I don't want that, had enough of girls,

Seen enough beauties, and their black long curls,

I hv seen many girls, I have seen many girls,

But you ain't a girl,Ayushi,you are a pearl !!!

 

So till that day comes,you don't have my words to buy,

We will walk across each other, after greeting a Hi,

I will come back from collge,take my facade off and do,

Confessing to your mirage that my love is true,

Registering myself in your long lovers queue, closing my eyes and grinning, dreaming of ......you!!!!
 

Author's Note

Though I was thinking it was irrefutable, the beautiful ones have their own taste.

Reviews

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i enjoyed reading this piece... very nicely done... i think this was my favorite part as it is just so... oh i dont know - real - everyone feels like this sometimes i think...
"And that's when I give my head a jerk and mockingly say oh f**k,
I got a chance but was defied by luck,
Despised by luck n deprived of luck,
Demised by luck and I admit that sucks."

[Sometimes I Think]

hmmm...drenched and...
simple yet carry a lot of practicality and realism!