SPRING- THE NATURE'S REBIRTH

Spring, an eternal delight for eyes is the living picture of beginning of Life.

Amidst the flavoured magic of blossoming trees,
And chirpy birds evoking the world,
The sun arouses the earth as if,
It lights the whole sky only for her.
The rains and winds seems so welcoming,
Giving the way to force hidden sprouts,
Arrival of cuckoos with its dawn chorus,
Feels like rebirth after the severe cold.
And so making everyone celebrating this uncanny glory...

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

I love how your name rhymes:) spring makes a dance of desires in the choirs of songbirds and our hearts soar
in expectation truly lovely lines! (but I'm ready for fall:)

[Vatsal Rohilla]

That's delicately and minutely done...such great observations...and such beautiful turns of phrases to present them poetically...this is the best of your poems that i've read...it's deep...it's intense...one can almost feel and perceive what you are conveying in each line.

Good work.

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Thank you so much Vatsal for your words of appreciation. I am glad that you understood what I tried to convey through my work. And yes I also feel that this is one of the best poem I ever wrote :)

[emmajoy]

'.. so making everyone celebrating this uncanny glory... '

You've brought tableaux of moments and emotions to life by way of your gentle words, wrapped them in real affection then, invited readers to gaze at their beauty. This is such a charming and lovely poem.

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Thankyou so much for your words of encouragement. I'm glad that you liked my work :)

[emmajoy]

My pleasure.. :)

[Jibey]

Spring is a wonderful time of year.. 'Flavoured magic' is an interesting phrase, as is 'uncannny glory'; 'hidden sprouts' has an unfortunate association with the green vegetables most children dislike (though I love them). It's good to celebrate the new birth of living things and the season of renewal
Keep blossoming!

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Thankyou so much Jibey for pointing out these mistakes. I will surely correct this

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear poet. I love the days of Spring. Amazing words shared and thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Thankyou Coyote for reviewing my work and your words of encouragement. It means alot to me :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem and you are welcome Aditi.

[Kent Rawski]

spring is time to rise and shine as your poem suggests enjoyed your descriptions welcome to writers café many very good writers to enjoy

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Thankyou so much Kent for your words of appraisal :)

[Weeping willow]

Beautifully expressed ;-]

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Thankyou so much for your review :)