UNSTOPPABLE

This is a common story, not new... Still I want to continue....

UNSTOPPABLE

You've melted my face,
Just because I said no.
Was this really your love for me?
That you dissolved me in my deep scars?

You've not only scarred my skin,
But also took away my sight.
Are you that same person?
Who once said "You've the most beautiful eyes?"

Though you've blackened my skin,
Charred my lips, disf my appearance.
Yet here I am still alive flourishing flames in the
darkness.
Wearing a pretty smile shining like a white
pearl.

I'm not gonna agonize,
For your hideous act you've done to me.
I'll strive and shine high in the sky,
Because beauty still lies with me!

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

You would pay money to revenge this outrage.
Was happening in Britain for a while.
It now carries a life sentence.

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Such hideous acts deserves a life sentence.

[Robert Trakofler]

wretched acts deserve wretched tacts!

[Robert Trakofler]

I could easily kill those people with a toothpick and i would enjoy doing it with a fervor... I know the point of your poem is not one of anger and revenge but to this bunny the perpetrators of such wretched acts of selfishness are the bane of his existence... I would hug every one of those girls till my arms bled but i also could kill those wretched with a toothpick. This was a very poignant write and a beautiful message! third stanza second line is Disf supposed to be dysfunction? or the deragotis test?

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Thankyou Bunny for your review. And yes these people who does such hideous acts deserve to die and rot in hell.
The word Disf is supposed to be "disfigured". Thankyou for noticing it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. To destroy a face because of hate. I liked the ending. I agree, beauty is skin-deep. Thank you for sharing the powerful and amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Thankyou Coyote for your words. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Aditi.

[Jibey]

It's good to hold on to that inner fire that expresses itself here...People who try to obliterate others our of spite simply obliterate themselves... Keep on shining! (but not 'shinning' lol)

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Thankyou Jibey for your review. I'll definitely keep on shining. :P

[Rye]

this is such an emotional write here, but wonderful

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Thankyou Ryanna for your review.

[Sneh]

This is beautiful, written with pure heart. These girls never asked for sympathy, still thriving and embracing ...!
Have you heard Anmol rodriguez's ted x speech? , that blowed my mind, really!
Good day :)

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

I'm glad Sneh, that you liked this. And yes I've heard Anmol's speech. These girls aren't victims, they are survivors.
This idea actually occurred to me when I went to a cafe run by them. You must have heard about it "Sheroes hangout".

[Sneh]

No, i have not heard about that, thanks for the information though! :)

[Living_igneel]

Elegant . Keep up the good work.

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Thankyou so much for your words. I'm glad that you liked it :)