Waves

Once a naive child
Sought after the sea
To feel as vivid blue
As the depths of it

Ventured in too far
Got swallowed by a wave
Trapped into the waters
Dissolving into them

Hence why I have no body
No place to keep my soul
Passed on all my sorrows
To waves crashing on the shore

Reviews

[Joli Dy]

Deceptively simple. I especially loved, "to feel as vivid blue as the depths of it"
The ending seems almost tao-esque in its dissolution of self to the waves.
This is a gem.

[Adriana]

Thanks for the thoughtful review