Purples

Nature's best musicians sing
Over lakes and ponds and streams
Sweet and salty waters hum
My guitar strings gently strum

Let the melody of worlds
Convey her gentle sound through you
Drown in deep blues
Sing in strong reds
So that you might live in purples

Follow singing rivers ahead
Go where no man's ever tread
Stay until you lose yourself
Stay until you lose your self

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

that was amazing. i really liked the description of the scenery and the way the red and blue blended into each other... connecting it to the title. that was really clever and it was satisfying to read. however, the last two lines really made it. when i'm walking through nature i have a habit of trying to finish the track as fast as i can. no, slow down i say to myself. this isn't about finishing the course, this is about... losing your self.

loved it.

[Adriana]

Thanks so much that's such a thoughtful review

[ashley]

omg i actually really like this. the way i interpret this poem is that finding balance and a medium in life is so important. i love the concept of the blues and the reds, that is SO creative girl, you deffo pulled it off perfectly. i also think the concept of using colours is so good, i think it represents things like ambition, but in a spiteful, or sombre way.

fantastic poem :3

[Adriana]

Ahh thxx so much you're too kind

[Michael Sun Bear]

Adriana, well done you.

My Mother who sang beside the River Hu would have hugged you and said “Absolutely enchanting.” Higher praise I cannot give you!

[Adriana]

Thank you so very much that is the best review I have gotten

[Joli Dy]

Rich and beautiful. The first two stanzas read like liquid music.

[Adriana]

Thank you:)