never leave my sight

you left me in the waiting room....

i could not help but wait for you...

you looked back at me with a smile

you knew what 

you knew when

you knew why?

all was falling apart

how could you still smile

you left me with your eyes closed

they took you in that horror door

where only the brave could go

and i could only stare the blinking red

i could not sit

so i stared the sky

that night was the darkest night

the stars you loved were hiding 

the wind blew like it was fighting

i waited for the door to open

but it just haunted me that night

you always told heart aches

i laughed and you never complained

but now i was feeling what you felt like

the time you were gone

i thought of your eyes

without fear,full of peace

how could you be so brave

and never hide your smile

the night passed by

i started fading

without you how will i survive

but then in just a moment the scene changed

came the morning light

with the birds flying

suddenly the wind was nice

the red light stopped blinking

my heart ached 

for the first time i felt alone

but then the door open

and there came two angles in white

they said you won the fight

and you will never leave my sight

i came to you

then you smiled

and i just cried

you laughed 

and said"let's start a fight"

then i shouted hard

" you will never leave my sight"

AND

"i will never leave your sight"

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. Good to have small fights. Good to create some spark and energy. I like the tale in the poem and the strong ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

More than just a poem, a poem that blends into a tale, beautiful! xoxo

[Jazique]

Nice I love the ending fight. Kind of humourus, well done.

[Cassie Fraga]

wow.... very deep penning my friend... GREAT JOB!!!

[Asb]

*opened

[EMMIE]

Awwwww sweeeet and very unique. Great job!

[Sarah]

Really nice. well done

[Manpreet]

Beutifully written poem!

[emilythestrange]

This is a beautiful story! I know it's a poem, but it has something real behind it.